Saturday, 22 January 2011

Feedback on the rough cut 1- BH


Untitled from Benji Hudson on Vimeo.



From the target audience:


-Good use of lighting.

-Too dark in some places i.e the shot before the stairs.

-Good use of symbolism with the screensaver.

-Great use of sound so far

-The screaming at the end could more use work- sound is somewhat off.

-More atmospheric soundtrack.

-Confusing at points.

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